User talk:Wokeathu

Organic Food Labor
Hello, please note that I've moved that article back into your userspace. As an outline and course intentions, it was certainly not "ready for mainspace". You can find the article at User:Wokeathu/Wikipedia Project. Thanks, Crow  Caw  18:45, 15 September 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Wokeathu, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Notes on draft
Hi! I wanted to give you some notes on your draft. So far this looks good, however my two notes would be to be careful to avoid an essay-like tone (ie, avoid narrative and persuasive tones) and to make sure that you source everything properly. Several portions of the information you added didn't have any or enough sourcing to really back up the claims, so the section needs more sourcing - remember that any uncited claim can be challenged and removed. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:59, 7 December 2017 (UTC)

Update
Hello! Thanks for the feedback. I added a couple more citations.Can you please review my section again and let me know if it is now ready for main space.