User talk:Wolrab12

Needed improvements at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Henry Barlow
Hello, the draft is a good start, but there are several things you need:


 * Please write your sources as full WP:Citations, as the current ones are very unclear. "The Times, October 5 1924"??? Which "Times" of the hundreds of papers so-named? What is the title and author of the article that describes Barlow? A reader might very well want to find the original article for their own research, so please provide all pertinent details of the source.
 * Please divide your draft into WP:Sections so that it is easier to read.
 * If at all possible, it would help to WP:Footnote your draft, so that instead of saying "here are four things I read to write this", you could place footnote(s) at the end of each paragraph so the reader knows which ref supports which facts.

Just a few things you can improve while waiting for Review. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:56, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

September 2013
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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Henry Barlow (September 13)
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Henry Barlow


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