User talk:Wonder107/work article name

Hi!

I was going through your article and it looks great! My only suggestions would be to re-read what you've written and make sure everything flows nicely. Also, I found myself wanting to know a bit more about somethings, like McCarthyism. Then again, you linked it to it's own Wikipedia page. I'm not sure if you need to expand on that since you're already linking it to a page that describes what it is. I'd also like to know if was ever married and why he became so passionate about stopping unnecessary censorship. Great job though!

Ea4537 (talk) 13:09, 3 December 2008 (UTC)Trista