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Dylan's Peer Review
These contributions look really good! I like how you cleaned up the wording in the biography section to allow it to flow better and seem more official. One thing I was wondering is if there was any more information regarding Gregg's parents' backgrounds. Were they from particular regions? Do we know the circumstances under which she was put up for adoption, and if this affected Gregg in any particular ways.

This article seems pretty neutral. The only minor concern I have is that the Career/Artistic Themes section might pull too much from Gregg's first person perspective rather than third person views.

The number of sources cited is amazing. This article is definitely strong in this regard.

Overall, this looks great! Keep up the great work!