User talk:Wquon/Chen Hengzhe

Your paragraph is informative and is consistent with the article topic. The content is concise and easy to read. According to your paragraph, the evidence to support your topic sentence is clear and with explanations, which is helpful for readers to understand why examples are used. The paragraph is written perfectly, which I enjoy reading it. Maybe it is better to add something more other than the New Culture Movement. (It is only a small piece of advice.) Siyi Shen (talk) 06:56, 28 October 2020 (UTC)