User talk:WrdsofHope12

We must be more careful!
One solution - which I depend on, is copying / pasting into word for a quick grammar and spell check. My edit box actually underlines the incorrectly spelled words. Also note, the number of edits is not particularly important to the assessment, since one could easily account for 7 when all that was gained was a reference. For those assisting and monitoring your progress, it is best to hit the preview button, access your efforts, and then hit save only when you are satisfied.--JimmyButler (talk) 23:40, 31 October 2011 (UTC)
 * This was the sentence that you added to the article: In captivity males must be separted due to agression towards each oter through consists of ramming, pushing, and overturning with the enlarged gular scute. The agression is used to establish dominence.
 * This was the sentence after editing by the community: In captivity males must be separated due to aggression towards each other, including ramming, pushing, and overturning with the enlarged gular scute. The aggression is used to establish dominance.

Lead
WP:LEAD, please don't stuff detailed information in the lead as you done here. The lead is suppose to summarize the body of the article and so detail only has to be sectioned out later. Regards, SunCreator (talk) 16:20, 7 November 2011 (UTC)