User talk:Writtenby

Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you enjoy editing and expanding the site, and if you do there are some pages that you might find helpful. They're kind of text heavy and probably not that enthralling, but if you skim them you'll get the idea. Personally I've never read any of them all the way through in one sitting, but refer to them when I need to; they're fairly common sense guidelines.
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I've left a comment at the talk page for the Battle of Arnhem. I don't wish to cause offence, but I cannot see how the obituary you linked to can be correct, given the way in which Theirs is the Glory evolved and the differences between it and Hagen's book. A much better reference would be one about the film itself, stating that it was based on Hagen's book (rather than a reference about Hagen mentioning the film), but I haven't come across one in my own little library and online the only source I can find is the obituary. As such I've removed the piece of text again.

Referring to one veteran's book amongst the dozens of others that have been written might be seen as undue weight towards that book, but I think, given that it was almost certainly the first, it deserves to stay. When I have a little bit more time I may expand the section a little bit to detail the sheer weight of publications on the battle.

Finally let me welcome you to Wikipedia once more and I hope you enjoy yourself. Ranger Steve  Talk  08:55, 19 October 2012 (UTC)