User talk:Wt28

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Hello, Wt28, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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peer review of Sisera
Hi, Wt28! I am concerned that the first sentence is paraphrased - it is too close to the original in Niditch's book - it either needs to be quoted or completely reworded. The other sentences you added got the idea across without paraphrasing and offers a slightly different perspective than the articles previously referenced - a helpful addition. RMLPTS (talk) 01:33, 25 November 2020 (UTC)