User talk:Wwwei x/Reasoned action approach

Peer Review: The lead sentence is clear and concise, and does describe the article's main topics. The lead portion does introduce the topic, but it doesn't outline what sections are coming in the article. The lead is not overly stated and if anything, could use a little more introduction into what is coming in the rest of the article. All of the content does seem to be up to date and related to the article. Several changes have been made in the past couple of weeks by my peer to reflect updated information, but there could be more references. The organization makes sense, and the tone is neutral. I would be careful though, because some of the topics addressed in the application could easily turn to a tone other than neutral. There is a great visual on the page and the general look of the article is good. Overall, I would add more sources, a bit more to the lead, and be sure not to lose the neutral tone in the applications.