User talk:Wxtrackercody/1993 Pacific hurricane season

Lead

 * "The season officially started on May 15 in the eastern Pacific, and on June 1 in the central Pacific, and ended on November 30; these dates conventionally delimit the period during which most tropical cyclones form in the northeastern Pacific Ocean." delink Pacific Ocean. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:49, 19 November 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "The Central Pacific Ocean saw very little tropical activity, with only one cyclone, Hurricane Keoni, developing in that particular basin. However, many storms out of the season crossed the threshold into the Central Pacific, many as hurricanes, and even major hurricanes." "Central Pacific Ocean" to "Central Pacific Hurricane Center". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:49, 19 November 2011 (UTC)
 * No, because that would not make the sentence sound right. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed to "Central Pacific" then. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:32, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "The season produced fifteen named storms, which was slightly below the average of sixteen named storms per season. However, the total of eight hurricanes during the season was slightly above average, and the total of nine major hurricanes was significantly higher than the average of three.[1]" no need for "the total". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:56, 19 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It makes it sound more clear and concise, IMO. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "However, the most notable storm of the season, in terms of fatalities, was Hurricane Cavlin. Originating from an area of disturbed weather on July 4, Calvin reached a peak intensity of 110 mph (180 km/h) before making an initial landfall near Manzanillo, Colima, Mexico. Rapidly weakening due to land interaction with the Mexican coastline, Calin re-emerged into Pacific waters, though the storm did not strengthen, and continued to weaken as it moved northwestward. On July 8, Calvin made a second, and final, landfall on the southern tip of Baja California Peninsula before weakening to a tropical depression and dissipating on July 9. At least 34 deaths can be attributed to the system, as well as $32 million (1993 USD) or more in damage." cut back on MH (that is not why Calvin is notable) and add in stuff about impact. YE   Pacific   Hurricane
 * ✅ TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Mention Beatriz, Eugene, and Fernanda in lead. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:56, 19 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The lede is for notable storms only – IMO, that is the strongest, and the deadly/damaging. So, I'm going to leave as is. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Eugene, Fernanda, and Beatriz are all notable. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:32, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Season summary

 * The 1993 MWR is here, which has useful info for the season summary section. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:00, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Hurricane Adrian

 * "Turning towards the northwest, Adrian gradually strengthened to attain hurricane status by 1200 UTC on June 15, and the storm reached a peak intensity of 85 mph (137 km/h) by early the following morning, along with a minimum barometric pressure of 979 mbar (28.9 inHg)." suggest re-wording to "Turning northwest, Adrian gradually strengthened and attained hurricane status on 1200 UTC June 15. Hurricane Adrain reached a peak intensity of 85 mph (137 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 979 mbar (28.9 inHg) by early the following morning." YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:05, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I like mine better. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "Becoming nearly stationary, Adrian further weakened to a tropical depression late the same day, and dissipated at 1800 UTC on June 19, without any effects to land." no need for "Becoming". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:05, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The storm was moving fast towards a specific direction, so "becoming" is needed. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Tropical Storm Beatriz

 * "On June 14, satellite imagery revealed an increase in thunderstorm activity to the south of the Gulf of Tehuanpec. Moving little, a broad surface low developed with the cloud mass, and a tropical wave moved through the area. Although the disturbance remained disorganized, a second tropical wave moved into the region on June 18, when the cloudiness there became better concentrated." sounds confusing, can you think of any better way to re-word it? I can't. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I can try, although it's confusing to me as well. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Try. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:37, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "Quickly strengthening, the depression intensified a tropical storm six hours later based on a ship report, earning the name Beatriz." I would re-word this to "The depression intensified Tropical Storm Beatirz six hours later based on a ship report". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * That doesn't sound right, I'll leave as is, for now. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't think your wording is right. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:37, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Check the IDD for a better damage total. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Will check it out, thanks for telling me. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Lidia 93's article has a tibit about Beatriz. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Will check it out. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:23, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I'd hold off giving Beatriz an article for now. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:37, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "Beatriz caused extensive damage in southwest Mexico, especially from heavy rains and flooding, with highest rainfall totals of be if I were between five and ten inches occurring in Oaxaca, with even higher totals of 11.97 in (304 mm) and 15.46 in (393 mm) from Las Pilas and Salina Cruz." I'd brake this sentence up if I were you. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:37, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Tropical Depression Three-E

 * "On June 12, a tropical wave moved off the western coast of Africa, and crossed the Atlantic Ocean with little to any development. Moving into the Pacific Ocean, it is estimated that a tropical depression formed at 00 UTC on June 27." delink those two (common geographic places) and oo to 0000 per WP:MOS. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:57, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "For the next several days, Three-E transitioned in movement between north and northwest, and by July 1, the depression approached Baja California." Baja California? You mean Baja California Peninsula right, because Three-E did not come close to Baja California (northern part of the peninsula) it came close to the actual peninsula. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  00:57, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "At 00 UTC July 2, the depression dissipated a short distance north of La Paz." 00 to 0000 UTC, and how far eaclty was it from La Paz. Oh, and wikilink to La Paz, Baja California Sur not the one in Bolivia. YE   Pacific   Hurricane  00:57, 20 November 2011 (UTC)