User talk:XAmberA/sandbox

Amber's Peer Review
- Lots of good information from reliable sources.

- Perhaps expanding on the lead to give more background information might be helpful.

- Is there any information to expand on how energy consumption is being reduced; as well as, how this affects the populations of Kyrgyzstan?

- Is there any information any stakeholder involvement in regards to this particular matter?

- Overall the article appears to be heading in the right direction.

Emily
You have very concrete sentences and good statistical numbers. I think you just need to further your information and expand more data. For instance, tell us more about the strategy that Kyrgyzstan adopts to reduce greenhouse gas emissions. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emily Ky (talk • contribs) 23:07, 18 October 2018 (UTC)