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1. First, what does the article-draft do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? The draft incorporates an excellent in-depth explanation of what clean eating consists of instead of listing the benefits/cons of food safety and scientific evidence for those claims like the original article did.

2. Are there sections in the article that seem unnecessary? Is anything off-topic?

Everything is on topic and relevant to the article being edited.

3. Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Explain. Remember, neutral doesn't mean "the best positive light" or "the worst, most critical light." It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.

The draft is equally balanced with pictures and explanations of what "Clean Eating" is as well as the positives and negatives.

4. Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors?

The draft informs the readers on exactly what you will expect (positive and negative) while eating clean with helpful pictures and explanations. The sources are from well known magazines and newspapers such as Vogue and The Guardian, but also from academic-based sources like the Gale Encyclopedia.

5. Are there any changes you would suggest the author apply to the article? Why? Having explanations of clean eating; the positive and negative effects directly next to the pictures to increase other readers understanding.

6. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! No.

7. Write your name followed up by "Courtneyhartwel (talk) 17:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)" Courtney HartwellCourtneyhartwel (talk) 17:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the feed back Courtney, appreciate it! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xaba.Adia (talk • contribs) 15:56, 4 November 2019 (UTC)