User talk:Xanthochromia/sandbox

Very well written article. Good job with the references and ample examples. It's a complex topic so I'd link many of your referenced terms to their appropriate individual wiki pages so people have easy access references. Also, I'd personally be careful with sentences that may convey absoluteness i.e. when likening the symptoms to infectious meningitis maybe include (symptoms including but not limited to). Overall great job. - ray

-Ahh you're right. I just made those changes thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xanthochromia (talk • contribs) 15:52, 28 April 2020 (UTC)