User talk:Xengvang/sandbox

This is where peer review feedback for Xengvan's GH contributions should be posted. Do this by clicking the New section button above. Remember to sign your Wiki username and complete the Canvas quiz to get credit for your peer review work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 16:31, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Dinah's Review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes. this content is written in an unbiased tone.

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? This content does not require the MEDRS guideline. This has nothing to do with medicine or treatment.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Both citations provided are in an APA format.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes. This content contributes a new section that was missing from the article. It adds more information to the main articles

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? The interaction section in the article could use a lot more information but the information already provided by the author is very sufficient. Dinahcann (talk) 14:34, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

J. Kelly Peer Review
Peer review questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? ''Yes, no issues here! There are some grammatical and punctuation errors however.'' Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? This isn't exactly a medical section so no issues here. Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes, they look good! Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, I think the addition of a structure section would be a good thing for the article. Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I think adding a structure section is good, but if you're going to make a whole new section don't be afraid to put in a little more content. Vcymbals16 (talk) 00:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)