User talk:Xhy279

Welcome!
Hello, Xhy279, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Xhy279 (talk) 17:10, 30 August 2015 (UTC)

Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Xhy279 (talk) 18:59, 30 August 2015 (UTC)

Some feedback on your draft
Hi Xhy279. I noticed that you are making good progress on your article draft. I did notice though that your tone is a little more conversational than you'd expect in an encyclopedia article. Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to address the reader - things like "Even if you can install..." Think about writing more like a reference book and less like an instruction manual. All the best. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:14, 15 September 2015 (UTC)