User talk:Xiaoxiao0727

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 21)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 24)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 19:00, 24 January 2016 (UTC)

welcome!!
welcome to my talk page and leave a message for me!

Hello, My name is Xiao. Glad to meet you here.Florabaoxiao (talk) 20:43, 24 January 2016 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Xiaoxiao0727, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello, My name is Xiao. Glad to meet you here.Florabaoxiao (talk) 20:42, 24 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello, This is PILJOONG KANG. Nice to meet you! PILJOONG KANG (talk) 05:21, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

The following are articles link that I want to working as my main project.

1. Cadaver https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cadaver Cadaver 2. Human body https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_body Human Body 3. Autopsy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autopsy Autopsy 4. The Anatomy Lesson of Dr. Nicolaes Tulp https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Anatomy_Lesson_of_Dr._Nicolaes_Tulp The Anatomy Lesson of Dr. Nicolaes Tulp Xiaoxiao0727 (talk) 20:52, 6 February 2016 (UTC) Xiaoxiao0727 (talk) 20:59, 6 February 2016 (UTC)

The Articles that I am interested in.
The following are articles link that I want to working as my main project.

1. Cadaver https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cadaver Cadaver

2. Human body https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_body Human Body

3. Autopsy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autopsy Autopsy

4. The Anatomy Lesson of Dr. Nicolaes Tulp https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Anatomy_Lesson_of_Dr._Nicolaes_Tulp  The Anatomy Lesson of Dr. Nicolaes Tulp

Xiaoxiao0727 (talk) 21:02, 6 February 2016 (UTC)==

Final Project Article
Death -- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death

IAH 209 Peer Review
This article is extremely informative and does a great job of covering a vast amount of information for such a broad topic. The article started out well and summed up the entire article with the line, “Death is an existential notion that refers to the end of the life. This is the particular point when the biological functions of a living being cease to operate completely.” This is a great line that really stuck with me throughout the rest of the reading. I think this would have also been a good opportunity to reference Stiff. Roach has some great examples of death that could potentially be referenced here, with some borderline examples that could be argued for life or death, like the beating heart cadaver. Your writing is extremely clear and professional, I would suggest making sure you are paraphrasing and the writing isn’t too close to the original writing of your sources. This is a very difficult process, and this is just your first draft so I am sure the writing will come along nicely by the time it is time to turn in the final draft. I don’t think the article needs too much more improvement beyond those couple of suggestions. The article is extremely informative and well researched. I don’t think anything in this article is applicable to my own article because we happen to have pretty different articles. However, reading this article definitely gave me better perspective on this course as a whole. Your article relates to the course very well, and it helped me cross reference some of the ideas, facts and concepts we have already learned. I was able to think back to some of the lectures, readings, short films, and excerpts from Stiff and compare and contrast. Overall, I would say this article is extremely well done, and I am looking forward to reading the final draft. Parmetaa (talk) 17:27, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Xiaoxiao0727/sandbox


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 02:42, 2 January 2017 (UTC)