User talk:Xinyuliu2000/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Very well explained and critically considered. Next time, practice making your article name into a hyperlink by using double brackets. - Kquave (talk) 19:53, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

Henry's peer review
Hi,

The additions you made are very strong, and you did a nice job of using a lot of sources. I would recommend expanding each one of the subsections, Education,...) Aside from that, the additions are not biased. Nice job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Henryasulin18 (talk • contribs) 02:17, 22 October 2018 (UTC)