User talk:Xiyuanwu/Poverty in China

Possible edits
Thanks for adding the section on "Women in Poverty"; I'm surprised that the original article lacked the section about gender, despite the fact that it includes Feminization of poverty under "see also" section. Shakaigaku Obasan (talk) 21:28, 17 November 2021 (UTC).
 * The 7th reference contains an error; you need to double check the date.
 * The entry contains several misspelled words - 38.9% compared to 25.2%, hospitalization, In addition, In terms of marital factors, public policies, responsibility, retire earlier, multidimensional poverty rate, marriage migration, because, Migrant wives, official data

Hi, I have made the peer review on your writing! Thank you. Echinacea10 (talk) 19:45, 16 November 2021 (UTC)