User talk:Xmf137roman/sandbox

Peer Review from Tyler
The edits on your article contribute in a well written and concise way. Your additions include good sources, important information, and increase the overall comprehensive quality of the article. The heading of the revelations section that you added is bolded when it shouldn't be, but that's a minor error that could be easily addressed. Overall, your writing style is academic in tone and excellent for wikipedia, however some sentences can feel a little stifled when reading at times. I would consider your edits to be in the A-range (excellent) as a grade. Tgclemons7 (talk) 19:21, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

JM's Peer Review
I can't find Roman's edits--they are not in his sandbox, nor on the group sandbox (via Savannah's sandbox). I need that information in order to provide feedback. Preliminary grade: F Jaclyn-Michael (talk) 21:15, 8 April 2019 (UTC)