User talk:Xyz2345/Women in Benin

Sharksarerad (talk) 17:32, 22 October 2021 (UTC)I think the section "women in the work place" is well done, I think it does a really good job explaining a Womens role in the workplace. There are also good citations for each statement you make in this section. An inclusion of a citation on the last sentence about sexual harassment would be really helpful. I like where the section Education & Intimate Partner Violence is heading. I do want to know more about how accessible education is to women. Is it hard for them to access it, are schools full, do they only attend for a few years? The section might even be able to be split up, intimate partner abuse and access to education could possibly be two different sections. I also think the health issue section has a lot of potential, but if you leave it where it is id probably be good. Answering questions about access to health care or other health risks that affect women would be a nice inclusion. Overall, I think it is good, I think adding more specific information to your existing sections and expand on it would be a good way to keep improving the article. I don't think your article has a lead, so maybe more the introduction section to be the lead, they seem to have similar information.Sharksarerad (talk) 17:32, 22 October 2021 (UTC)