User talk:YL14663p/Wim Botha/Jometcalf13579 Peer Review

User YL14663p uses a brief but good introductory biography introducing Wim Botha and his background.There could have been more on his past although it was very good and I'm sure there isn't a lot on him as he's not a very well known artist.

In terms of his "works", there is a solid description of what he's done over the years that could use more specific examples, but covered his overall jobs very well. It seems pretty up to date as there's once again not a whole not on this person we can infer there wasn't a whole lot to discuss right away but there is also the topic adressing the historically underrepresented populations and topics that could've been touched on a bit more.

The user also does a good job keeping his tone neutral, there doesn't seem to be any indication that he feels a certain way about his artist and the claims aren't biased or sided. All areas seem represented and no one side is left out.

The bulk of his work was in the "Exhibitions" which were extremelty detailed and lenghty all throughout the timeline and very informative of different events and actions

In terms of sources and references he had more than enough each not too short or irrelevant all from different authors and pages and not from too long ago to be outdated. There are a few other sources that could have been added but there's no right answer as they're all relevant and cover the same ideas.

The organization was good, there was no confusion about order of topics or dates. Verbal or grammatical errors were fine and everything was broken into good sections. There could have been more images and designs to give more of an idea what was going on but still nonetheless very good.