User talk:Yachtdesign

Your submission at Articles for creation: Giovanni Sorrentino (November 15)
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 Whispering ( talk ) 13:38, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi whispering I edited again the article with the references can you check it again and help me if there is something wrong? Yachtdesign (talk) 11:36, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Yachtdesign (talk) 12:33, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Giovanni Sorrentino (December 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Milowent was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Giovanni Sorrentino and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Milowent • hasspoken 18:51, 15 December 2018 (UTC)