User talk:Yagabab/sandbox

peer review
What does the article (or section) do well?

I think that all of the information being provided in the article is all really important to the topic and interesting as well! I really love the topic I've never heard of it.

What changes would you suggest overall?

A few more pictures would be a nice change as well, though I really like the one already included.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

Possibly adding more information on the qualification and experience needed before tackling the challenge of hiking the High Peaks.

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I really liked the table feature you used in creating a list of the members, this might be something for me to consider with my article. Kaymyk (talk) 18:39, 4 November 2022 (UTC)

What does the article (or section) do well?

This page does a really good job of delivering information about a topic most people would never have otherwise known existed. It manages to hold the reader's attention without needed too much flare and keeping a neutral tone. This could just be because I am personally interested in the topic though I suppose.

What changes would you suggest overall?

If you could maybe show some of the things you reference like a picture of the winter patch you mention at the end I think that would be a neat addition but it is up to you if you feel more information is missing.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

If you could maybe go a little bit more into detail on the 46ers as they exist today I think that would go a long way. You do say enough but if there is more detail to throw in that you can find I think it would only benefit the page.

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I think this was a really great piece to reference to explain some information on a topic most people never would have approached considering I am attempting to write about a physics topic most people would not touch with a 39 and a half foot pole. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ChrisP623 (talk • contribs) 18:50, 4 November 2022 (UTC)