User talk:Yalie123/sandbox

Looks like you could be doing a bit more to move toward your first draftRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:39, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Amazing work!! Maybe consider naming the 2004 obesity study? Also, "mega 3 fatty acids alone will not prevent one from developing breast cancer, however a high omega 3:6 fatty acid ratio will," seems like a definitive claim. -little ski monkey — Preceding unsigned comment added by Littleskimonkey (talk • contribs) 17:29, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Lots of good statistics! There are many good meta-analysis articles towards the end of the article, but try to see if you can find more for the beginning rather than individual studies, or if the individual studies are the only thing available, maybe mention the number of participants in the study just so that you can confirm the reliability to the readers. Also just as a general comment, make sure that all of your claims have sources (since there are so many, it might get a little hard to keep track of all of them). Overall, really good article so far! Bunnydew15 (talk) 18:50, 9 November 2017 (UTC)