User talk:Yanni910/sandbox

What does the article (or section) do well?

- good structure to article

- good level of citation for facts

What changes would you suggest overall?

- tighten up grammar, limit usage of colloquialisms

- cite more sources in the intro

- avoid rhetoric (essay writing), stick as much as you can to facts with sources

- are there research studies that have been done on medication tourism in terms of its success or fail rate?

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

- tighten up wording, eliminate "essay writing"

''Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!''

- good and complex structure, it has good multi-layer logic

Zhang.eu (talk) 15:31, 28 February 2020 (UTC) Zhang.eu