User talk:Yantingzou

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I removed your edit here.

"The relationship between the organisation and the public is that the organisation interrupts to general public, government..."

I'm not sure what you're trying to say; "interrupts to". The sentence does not make sense in english. You've also used a source that looks pretty flaky. Please read over our guidelines on reliable sources. Maybe using Google Books or some other place would be a good place to start - there is no end to the reliable and academic material written on PR.

You also seem to have added some material, and then crossed it out Here? Do you want to just delete the sentence? I'm not sure why you'd add something and then strike it out. Kuru  (talk)  23:51, 17 April 2017 (UTC)