User talk:Ychen304/sandbox

Hi! This content seems relevant to the topic and up-to-date. However, I don't see any linked citations for me to check through (to double check that the links work and that the information pulled from the articles is interpreted correctly).

On citations--you say that the italicized words are cited sections while bolded words are your contributions. Does this mean that the italicized sections are direct quotes from others' articles? Either way, here are some recommendations since this isn't clear: •Add in citations using the "Cite" button on the toolbar you see while editing your page. You can either manually enter the citation or have Wikipedia do an auto-citation of your source. •If the italicized words belong to others, be sure to change these sentences to your own interpretations of data/findings. •Since the writing of Wiki pages is super concise (intentionally), nearly every sentence or two will have a citation; or, at the least, every paragraph.

Regarding statements like the one from the section Statistics in Education: ["My current major is Computer Information System and I deeply realize the extreme gender gap behind computing field, based on what I saw and what I was experiencing at school."] Remember that Wikipedia is not a place for subjective comments. In other words, we can't include our own beliefs, opinions, or experiences. Instead, we must only convey data and research of others - findings and/or events that are replicated, significant, relevant, and objective. While information about your studies is interesting, note that anecdotal experiences are not relevant to Wiki articles.

You have a large amount of information added here, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can tell that you were thorough in finding and making contributions. I hope this helps you make your final edits!

Edit: forgot to add name
Peer review done by Olivia O'Neil! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ooneil (talk • contribs) 05:33, 24 November 2020 (UTC)