User talk:Yellow Flannel/sandbox

help Yellow Flannel (talk) 20:57, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

Review "Water supply and sanitation in Hong Kong"

I found the first half of the article to have a good amount of information and I was able to learn a lot from it. I thought that the sections "Protecting raw water quality" and "Sources of water" were the stronger sections in the article. However, the second half seems to be lacking as it doesn't have as much information as the first. The section "Institutional framework" seems like it should be of much importance, however it is only three sentences long. I'd suggest expanding upon this section in order to make the article more informative. Also, the third source for the article is relied upon pretty heavily in the article, so I'd suggest finding more information from other sources to include in order to ensure a balanced article that provides multiple points of view.

SeulgiSua (talk) 06:56, 20 November 2019 (UTC)