User talk:Yellow Road15

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Religious commentary
Thank you for adding to the article Disciple (Christianity). However, I removed your addition for now, because it seemed to be a religious point of view rather than appropriate content in an encyclopaedia. Personal interpretations of scripture passages are not encouraged in Wikipedia; it is better to attribute material to secondary sources, such as published commentaries by notable theologians.

I hope this does not discourage you from contributing again. – Fayenatic  L ondon 11:08, 4 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Hello Fayenatic london! All normally. - Yellow Road15 (talk) 16:11, 4 August 2015 (UTC).
 * Hi, that's more like it! I think you would do better to integrate the material into the existing "Family and wealth" section on the page, and perhaps have a summary sentence on that theme in the lead section. The lead should not include any material which is not covered in more detail in the body of the article, but just introduce the overall subject to give context. – Fayenatic  L ondon 20:48, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
 * I had a go at this myself. – Fayenatic  L ondon 08:52, 7 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you! I was far of Internet in last days. Yellow Road15 (talk) 11:54, 7 August 2015 (UTC)