User talk:Yeseniacx/Lisa Rutherford (artist)

Overall, your wiki page was very thorough and well worded. It appeared to be neutral, the information was relevant and your sources seem reliable. The intro section at the top was really good because it was short and to the point, the only change I might consider is how the last sentence is worded. By writing she "sells wherever she can" comes off a bit informal. I might try wording it as "sharing her work when given the opportunity," or something along those lines. Obviously some sections were missing which made your paper shorter, like the artworks for example, but once you add those missing pieces in you should get a higher word count. Also, adding a brief explanation to the award/honors section can make your article longer and more thoroughly explained. When adding in explanations of her artworks, you might want to consider adding them (as subheadings) to the career section. Be sure to add a section explaining what exhibitions her work has been featured at! One section I enjoyed a lot was "early life". If you find yourself having any further trouble with meeting the length requirements, a short section on Cherokee women, the type of art she makes, or things along those lines may help. It was brief but to the point and each section was backed up with evidence. The "Current Life" section might also fit well under the "Career" heading, possibly beneath in a subheading as well. The only thing I would have liked better is a bit more material to edit but that's no trouble, it's clear you are on the right track! There are no major grammatical issues or problems I see regarding the tone of the paper. With just adding a few more sections that are needed to meet each requirement for the assignment, everything will turn out great! Keep up the great work. :-) - Samantha Gonzalez Sgonz163 (talk) 21:05, 22 February 2020 (UTC)