User talk:Yfz5256/Xiaomi/Wzy5092 Peer Review

Wenyu Yang's peer review
I think the lead of the article is clear and relevant to the topic. The introductory sentence is concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. It does concise and includes information that is present in the article. The content is up-to-date and includes information on the history of xiaomi. The content is relevant to the topic. The tone is neutral and not overrepresented or underrepresented. It does not add an attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another. The organization is well-written and easy to read. The sources and references are well-cited and do contain current sources. Overall, I think the article is quite good. It does need some new and updated information like the history of 2020.