User talk:YherChu/sandbox

Hello, I read your modifications on the article as part of the peer review. About your section "Connections to different attribution errors," I think that it would help to give an overview of the fundamental attribution error before comparing it to the group attribution error. The reader needs to understand the new concept of fundamental attribution error that is not mention previously in the article. In addition, you need to expand the information. Maybe, you could find and example that applies to the connection between the two errors. Secondly, I noticed that you extracted the sentence comparing group attribution error and ultimate attribution error from the previous article paragraph and found a source for this specific sentence. Does this source support the previous information in the "Limitation" section? If it does, you could also use it as a source for the section. Again, you need to provide more information about new concepts. You may briefly explain ultimate attribution error and give more information about its relation with group attribution error. If your source is the one from 1975, you could try to find a secondary source. You may consider creating different subheadings for fundamental attribution error and ultimate attribution error for better organization. Finally, your will have to separate your source citation from your paragraph. Thank you.Vsusy89 (talk) 23:43, 13 November 2017 (UTC)