User talk:Yitazeesel

American Gathering of Jewish Holocaust Survivors and their Descendants
I agree the article I reverted to was not sufficient. But there are some problems with the present version. Please see our Business FAQ (which also applies equally to non-profit organisations). see our guide to writing Wikipedia articles.
 * 1) First, if you do want to copy material from pre-existing material that you own, you must follow the procedure of giving us a GFDL license. Now, I do not know if it is a copy from somewhere--it does not seem to be from the website--but it reads as if it were from some handout or brochure, andthat brings up the next points:
 * 2) Articles must be written with encyclopedic language--not flowery, not praising the group, just describing in a neutral manner what it has accomplished. Otherwise, it sounds promotional.
 * 3) There absolutely must be 3rd party independent reliable published sources, print or online (but not blogs or press releases, or material based on press releases)

You are not likely to find a Wikipedia administrator more sympathetic to the purposes and activities of your organization than I, andIwant to help the article gets rewritten with references that will sufficiently show its importance. I hope you'll add them. DGG (talk) 16:24, 7 February 2009 (UTC)