User talk:Yiwen122/Luxun native place

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

One issue to consider is how to make sure this article focuses on encyclopedic information rather than turning into too much of a travel guide. You will want to focus your energy on adding details about the location, its history, news, and so on. It's a subtle point, but details about opening times and closing times are not typical of an encyclopedia entry. You might want to compare what you have to other similar topics as a model. This is the category where I found many examples: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Birthplaces_of_individual_people

Kaylea Champion (talk) 01:56, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow up from Kaylea
Hi

You are making progress, but I think there is still a lot of "travel guide" type information in here as I mention above. Also, the Bibliography section is only meant to be your notes -- it doesn't belong in the article itself. All of the reference information should go into the citations.

Keep working~

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:19, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Hi

This still has "travel guide" information in it -- the ticket price in particular is what I am thinking about here.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 20:33, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Go-Live Approval
Hi

You are approved to go live, but first please check your sources. I know that Baidu in particular is not a reliable source for English Wikipedia. You might find this list of reliable sources useful -- maybe you can find a little bit more information from some things in the WikiProject China resource list:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_China#Resources

Overall, I want to make sure that you've made enough additions that your work qualifies for full credit on the assignment; at this point, I think a little more work is needed.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 8) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:48, 12 February 2022 (UTC)