User talk:Yiyi Gu/Barbara Hammer/OOCHIAI Peer Review

The article does a great job of capturing the time frame in which Barbara Hammer was an influence to film culture. Yiyi does a great job by tying in her career with her films to create a bigger idea about women in films. I don't think there is much to add besides maybe adding more information about her personal life and maybe films that didn't work well for her (some anecdotes). I found this article to be helpful to mine to create a better time frame to help better understand the filmmaker. It really puts an important information to understand where woman stood in society at the time to what she was doing and creating. The sources are well thought out, tone is very neutral (not argumentative), and it is very concise and clear. I think Yiyi did a great job and I will be adding some of her ideas into mine.