User talk:Yjcyberia

I found a sentence in an article that makes it seem as if Juan Ponce de Leon died because he did not find the fountain of youth.

Historians speculate that, due to his failure to find mythical fountain of youth, Ponce de León was eventually forced to die.

not only does that just sound a little silly but early in the article in mentions that he was likely not looking for a fountain to begin with

Most historians hold that the search for gold and the expansion of the Spanish Empire were far more imperative than the any potential search for the fountain.[37][38]

My question is this, is this the type of thing I should recommend be changed or is it to. . . nit picky?
 * It is indeed, silly, and I am tempted to remove it. However, the desired approach is to raise the question on the Talk Page. I urge you to bring it up there, and in the meantime, I will check into some related issues.-- SPhilbrick  T  11:07, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Good catch. I wanted to check into two issues. First, the sentence added has a reference, but the reference is to Find a grave. I checked the Reliable Sources Noticeboard and confirmed that Find a Grave is not viewed as a reliable source. This step turns out to be moot, as the reference doesn't support the claim. The other thing I wanted to check as to see whether the editor made any other changes to the article. The editor did, the other one is more innocuous, but I'll fix them both. If you haven't yet visited the talk page, there is no longer a need to; I'll add a comment there.-- SPhilbrick  T  11:21, 23 May 2011 (UTC)