User talk:Ykcat/Kathoey

I think, overall, these are really good additions to the article. A couple of things I want to note: I would use "sex reassignment surgery" instead of "genital reassigment surgery." While SRS is an iffy term, "bottom surgery" is a Western slang term so we can't use that, and I know genital reassignment surgery isn't used in modern times. I would also have someone check this for grammar mistakes, as I saw a run-on sentence or two. But you're doing a good job!

Kash2893 (talk) 16:39, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

This is a great start! Your writing is very clear and concise. A few things I noticed: - Sentence 3 could be made into two sentences rather than one. - The second paragraph in the second section could use more clarification/added sentences and information and a little more flow from the first paragraph in this section. - The last sentence in the first section could be made into two sentences rather than one. - The last sentence in the third section could use more clarification.

Your sources looked good and reliable to me, and you used them well throughout your writing. Overall, great job :)Umk5717 (talk) 17:28, 22 October 2021 (UTC)