User talk:Yliu3089/sandbox

Hi, I am doing peer review for your draft on your wiki project.

1. The lead section is a bit brief and you can add a bit more information. Lead Section serves as the introduction of the topic and it should provide the most important summary of the content. You mentioned that "Artemisinin is the chemical compound that was extracted by Chinese pharmacologist Youyou Tu...". You focused on where it comes from instead of what it is. Besides what you have edited there, I think you can add the most important characteristics or properties of artemisinin in your lead section.

2. The structure of the article needs to be expanded a lit bit more by adding some sub-sections. I noticed that in your citation, you have cited some articles which talked about the structure and reactions. You can expand your structure by splitting what you have edited and adding additional supplementary information to form your subsections.

3. I really like how you talked about the function of artemisinin. I think besides what you have covered in your draft, you can also add some other aspects. For example, you can mention a lit bit about history and the details about how it was discovered. In addition, you can mention the side effects of this particular chemical compound.

4. I think your content here is pretty good in general. The tone of your article is precise and natural. Everything listed here is related to the topic, but not enough reliable and sufficient information can be provided. What you had written is very objective. I think there is one thing that you need to notice. You mentioned something about Dr. Tu was awarded the Nobel prize. You should also cover some details on this in your main body of the article.

5. I think all of your 10 references follow the format, which is really good. However, for some of your references in your "10 references" section, I noticed that some of the references are published in Chinese journals, which would make it difficult for people who are not familiar with the language to check the references you cited.

Keep up the good work and good luck on your final submission.Timmyhuanghe (talk) 12:50, 30 March 2019 (UTC)