User talk:YoCuzwaasup777

Cyrus
I see your edit there has been reverted. I can see a couple of problems with it. Wikipedia articles should avoid telling people what they should note or what is important, we leave that to the reader and our sources. And we try to avoid primary sources - this means you would normally need a source meeting WP:RS, ie an academic work on Cyrus or Daniel, which says the same thing. You might also need to say "According to so and so". For this article we would certainly require mainstream sources - and although you wouldn't need to use them all, if it isn't a commonly held view it probably wouldn't be suitable. Some articles and edits are straightforward, others definitely are not. Doug Weller talk 14:38, 9 January 2016 (UTC)