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Wikipedia Assignment II:Due October 1

Link to the Wikipedia topic I have chosen to make improvements and suggestions on: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Camouflage

Link to my 3 suggestions for the Wikipedia topic I found: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Camouflage Suggestions to "In Zoology" 1. In order to help bring out the importance of camouflage and it's role in evolution in the animal kingdom I would add some history in biology and add how the ability to disguise one's appearance helped Darwin and Wallace illustrate how natural selection and adaptation works in varying species. 2. Camouflage is much more than the actual coloration of the species. I would add information on camouflage role in use of morphological structures or material found in the environment 3. I would add information of different forms of camouflage; dazzle camouflage, distractive markings in camouflage, and disruptive coloration in camouflage. yoho.28 Yoho.28 (talk) 19:29, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Link to my one sentence and one citation I added to the topic: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Camouflage&action=submit

My one sentence and citation I added to the topic: Camouflage The power of natural selection in the science of camouflage is based on the strategy of species concealing their appearance to avoid predation and to survive in a competitive world. Citation: Stevens, Martin, and Sami Merilaita. "Animal Camouflage: Current Issues And New Perspectives." Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences 364.1516 (2009): 423-427. Print. yoho.28 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yoho.28 (talk • contribs) 19:45, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Feedback

 * 1) Bear in mind that Wikipedia articles are integrated into a whole. For article sections, this means the article itself - there's no need to explain or repeat things that a reader should have encountered higher up the page. They're also connected to other articles by wikilinks - if there's some term or concept that the average reader may not be familiar with, provide a link to the article where they can learn more.
 * 2) Don't forget to break your text up into paragraphs and use inline citations to link to your references. If you use the inline citation template available in the edit box (the place you write text in Wikipedia) not only does that keep the reference close to the place you cite it, it also makes it difficult to forget to include the actual source from which the citation came.