User talk:Yonaisablink

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Happy editing! Kj cheetham (talk) 20:19, 9 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you Kj! I look forward to contributing to Wikipedia! Yonaisablink (talk) 04:59, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Apparel Group moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Apparel Group, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page.  HighKing++ 17:16, 10 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi! Okay sure, I will try to work hard to make the article more credible. Sorry, it's my first time! Yonaisablink (talk) 05:04, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, is it possible to see my draft page please and give me some advice @HighKing? Draft:Apparel Group Yonaisablink (talk) 05:27, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, there are a lot of guidelines to cover all sorts of organizations and it can seem overwhelming at first. Your article topic is a commercial company so I can summarise what we require by way of references/sourcing in order to meet the criteria for establishing notability.

Wikipedia is not the Yellow Pages nor a platform for promotion.
 * Because this is a company/organization, WP:NCORP guidelines apply.
 * We require references that primarily discuss the *company* and provides information *in detail* and which contains deep/significant coverage WP:CORPDEPTH.
 * We require references that contains "Independent Content". "Independent content", in order to count towards establishing notability, must include original and independent opinion, analysis, investigation, and fact checking that are clearly attributable to a source unaffiliated to the subject WP:ORGIND.
 * We don't combine references. Each reference that is used to establish notability must meet all the criteria WP:SIRS.
 * Looking at the sources you've provided, here's why they fail the criteria
 * Forbes 50 Most Powerful Businesswomen has no information about the company, fails CORPDEPTH
 * Retail Market Study 2013 only mentions the company in passing because Dalma Mall signed a lease agreement. Same as the other mentions-in-passing for other agreements in that report. There is no in-depth or detailed information about the topic company, fails CORPDEPTH
 * Retail Market Study 2016 suffers the same issues as above. Fails CORPDEPTH
 * EBOOK: Retail Marketing has a small summary paragraph describing the topic company but the description is essentially the same information (ie not "Independent Content") from their website and there is no "independent" information/analysis/opinion/etc from the author. The focus of the entry is the agreement with Tim Horton. Fails ORGIND.
 * The Report: Dubai 2016 is also a one sentence mention in a list of lots of other companies, fails CORPDEPTH
 * Gulf News article is a mention, it has no deep/in-depth/significant information on the company. Fails CORPDEPTH
 * Dubai Chamber shows the logo on a page of logos. Fails CORPDEPTH as above
 * This from Khaleej Times is a mention and a quote from the CEO. Fails CORPDEPTH
 * This next from Khaleej Times is just the mention, fails CORPDEPTH
 * This last from Khaleej Times is also just a mention and a quote from the founder, fails CORPDEPTH
 * This next from Dubai Chamber is a mention, fails CORPDEPTH
 * This and this from Dubai Chamber are all mentions-in-passing, fails CORPDEPTH. Note: In general, industry prizes like these are not regarded as helping in establishing notability
 * This from Filipino Times fails for the same reason. Note: In general, industry prizes like these are not regarded as helping in establishing notability
 * This from The National News is a mention, fails CORPDEPTH
 * This from Images RetailME is a profile of the founder with the standard company description, fails ORGIND/CORPDEPTH
 * This from Zawya is a mention and in general, local industry prizes are not regarded as assisting in establishing notability. Fails CORPDEPTH
 * This from the Gov. of Dubai is a mention and fails CORPDEPTH. Note that local industry prizes etc
 * This from SKEA, see above about mentions and prizes, fails CORPDEPTH
 * This next from Images RetailME has no in-depth info, etc, fails CORPDEPTH
 * In summary, there is no doubt that the company is big and successful but what we need to see is *somebody else* writing *about* the company in detail. Analysing the company, providing their independent opinion, demonstrating that the company is notable because people outside of the company's influence has taken note and written about it. Hope that helps.  HighKing++ 13:27, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks High King, your reply was so detailed, thanks for taking out the time really. I will try to see where I can find sources that match this. Yonaisablink (talk) 06:33, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi High King.
 * Would these two links be considered for CORPDEPTH
 * https://medium.com/authority-magazine/sima-ganwani-ved-of-apparel-group-why-we-need-more-women-founders-here-is-what-we-are-doing-to-15b11321c5a8
 * https://mags.itp.com/CEOME/2021/0167-CEO-MAR2021/#page=18 Yonaisablink (talk) 13:16, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Apparel Group (September 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by HighKing was:

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 HighKing++ 13:31, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Apparel Group
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:02, 15 March 2023 (UTC)