User talk:Yoshi-dawg/Monorail Espresso

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

You may notice that a logo or other image was removed from your article -- this is due to a copyright violation. If you look in your history you'll see that another Wikipedian caught the problem and fixed it for you. Some images are only allowed to exist once on Wikipedia -- in the main article for the topic -- and can't be in your sandbox. Don't worry, we'll add it back when we help you make your changes live.

One area to improve as you revise is maintaining a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic. You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: WP:NPOV. Some of the language sounds a little too much like an advertisement and not enough of an independent article.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:31, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval
Hi

I know we talked about this but I wanted you to have a written record.

This article looks like it needs a little more work before it would receive full credit for this assignment.

If you want to, you can move it to live and then continue to work. The goal is to advance the article by a quality class in ways that demonstrate engagement with the norms of Wikipedia. To be sure that you demonstrate that, you might think about adding an info box, or keep drilling for more references. I found an article that talks about Monorail getting pushed out of Westlake -- https://www.jstor.org/stable/44676095. If you wanted to, you could visit, take photos and add them to wikimedia commons, then add those photos to the article.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Add back images.
 * 6) Note on article talk page.
 * 7) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 8) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 9) Celebrate!

You'll also want to add back the images that got removed. Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:29, 10 February 2022 (UTC)

Final Edits
I have completed editing this article and have proceeded to go live. I appreaciate any feedback or contributions others want to make. Yoshi-dawg (talk) 23:48, 10 February 2022 (UTC) Yoshi-dawg