User talk:Yoshix

Ways to improve Suisei Hoshii
Hi, I'm Mabalu. Yoshix, thanks for creating Suisei Hoshii!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Hello, thanks for your new article! There are some problems with the article that need addressing, particularly untagged sections, and some of the sections are very promotional and appear to exist solely to promote the subject's work rather than offering a neutral encyclopaedic perspective. It is also Wikipedia policy that biographies of living people MUST be cited to reliable sources, and the only citations given are for the film awards - none of the other biographical content is cited. Please consider rewriting the article and adding more citations to make it less promotional and more neutral.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Mabalu (talk) 23:11, 26 February 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi, Mabalu,Thanks for contacting me.I have now addressed some of the points in my article as you suggested.Changes have been made and citations added.I hope these changes will offer a more neutral perspective, rather than appearing promotional.If you have any further comments, please don’t hesitate to contact me.--Yoshix (talk) 13:08, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

Deletion discussion about Suisei Hoshii
Hello, Yoshix,

I wanted to let you know that there's a discussion about whether Suisei Hoshii should be deleted. Your comments are welcome at Articles for deletion/Suisei Hoshii.

If you're new to the process, articles for deletion is a group discussion (not a vote!) that usually lasts seven days. If you need it, there is a guide on how to contribute. Last but not least, you are highly encouraged to continue improving the article; just be sure not to remove the tag about the deletion nomination from the top.

Thanks,

Mabalu (talk) 23:23, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

March 2017
Hello, I'm Clubjustin. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —the one you made with this edit to Suisei Hoshii— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Clubjustin Talkosphere  09:55, 8 March 2017 (UTC)