User talk:Youknowyunho

Welcome!
Happy editing! Peaceray (talk) 03:25, 2 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello Peaceray,
 * I am editing Wikipedia for a school project and I decided to read some academic articles to help my process. The portion I edited comes from a reputable source and the changes made to it (after my own) distort the information from the original journal I consulted.
 * I understand that my writing might have come off more editorial-like, but that is simply because I am used to writing that way. However the information I provided specifically regarded Girlfight and how it helps bring female athletes of color into the limelight. The article author, Camilla (not Camille) Fojas did not write much on Blonde Fist but rather noted it as an example of female boxers in movies. Youknowyunho (talk) 05:13, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Youknowyunho, I figured as much, hence my edit summary. In brief, everything needs to be verified, and unlike in academic writing we can never editorialize (or use "we"). All opinions must be stated as opinions, and be attributed to whoever said them. I also need you to think about the placement of the footnote. The way you did it suggested, or confirmed, that it was you speaking, not the source. Good luck, Drmies (talk) 12:23, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Drmies, thank you for elaborating on your feedback. I have since revised my contribution and wrote it from an objective standpoint, emitting my elaboration "Girlfight." Youknowyunho (talk) 16:31, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

October 2023
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Women's boxing, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Please see MOS:SECTIONHEADING, which stipulates Section headings should generally follow the guidance for article titles (above), and should be presented in sentence case (Funding of UNESCO projects in developing countries), not title case (Funding of UNESCO Projects in Developing Countries). Peaceray (talk) 03:29, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate your contributions, but in one of your recent edits to Women's boxing, it appears that you have added original research, which is against Wikipedia's policies. Original research refers to material—such as facts, allegations, ideas, and personal experiences—for which no reliable, published sources exist; it also encompasses combining published sources in a way to imply something that none of them explicitly say. Please be prepared to cite a reliable source for all of your contributions. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. Thank you. Peaceray (talk) 03:29, 2 October 2023 (UTC)