User talk:YoungGA23/Salmonella enterica subsp. enterica/Macaroon19 Peer Review

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I could not find the Kingsley source that is in your sandbox. I think this article would have great information. The source that is on the wiki article (labeled as 4) says that there are over 2,300 serovars but in the article, it reads that there are 2,500 serovars. In your sandbox, it says 2,500 and it is noted that a source is needed. Looking at the source provided on the wiki article, the source is from 2004. Try to find an updated one that can support the claim of 2,500 serovars. There are also three sources in your bibliography but there is no information on those in your sandbox.

The section labeled Survival in the stomach that is posted in your sandbox has very good information. However, I do not know where it came from. Is this from the wiki article you are working on, or is this from one of your sources?

Looking at the wiki article, the section of Serovars is filled with a lot of information that could be separated. Adding sections such as history and structure might be good for your article.Macaroon19 (talk) 14:48, 6 October 2023 (UTC)