User talk:Youngscholar000/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes, though this contribution is slightly short. Look for opportunities to expand

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: yes—one. Look for further opportunities to link

Score: 20/20

Peer Review:

Hi Riley. Your Wikipedia page is well written. Your part clearly shows one of the applications for particle in a box. I appreciate the formulas and the beta carotene structure, which is very helpful for the audience to see. The way you discuss the more complex concepts is well written and allows the reader to understand in a more layman’s term. One suggestion I have for you is maybe work out the beta carotene example—show how many pair of electrons there are in the structure and how you arrive at the numbers. Good job! -Meeshko

KO, YOO MIN Peer Review Score: 20/20