User talk:Your Neighbourhood Editor/sandbox

The writer did a pretty good job of summarizing some key points about the story in the article. However, there are a few improvements that can be made. Firstly, the introduction could use a bit more restructuring as it does not explain to me what will be discussed in the article. Secondly, There are 2 more themes that can be added such as Patriarchy and Masculinity. Lastly, for the heading heteronormitivity, I think it should be changed based on the information that is under the heading. PrettyJamaican (talk) 01:10, 31 March 2021 (UTC).