User talk:Yoursfrankly

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Feedback on the Airway Management
Re: foreign bodies:

I really like the progression of ideas and the language used in the beginning, stressing the importance/epidemiology of foreign objects in the airway and common techniques used to manage that situation. You could expand on (or link to?) the difference in BLS protocols for babies vs adults if you wanted to.

In the hospital setting section, I would also expand on the last sentence. For instance, i might not exactly know what blind suction is. What is the device used in that? Also, what other surgical methods can be considered? Ones described in this article?

Re: '''Surgical Methods: ''' I like the outline and division of topics. Very clear. I think in the second paragraph, this sentence is redundant and i would get rid of it : " A cricothyrotomy is nearly always performed as a last resort in cases where orotracheal and nasotracheal intubation are impossible or contraindicated."

i would also expand on complications associated with cricothyrototomy. maybe 1 sentence? You mention complications and breifly mention it for trachs, but not for crikes.

Otherwise, very well put together, clear, thorough.

VeeBabzel (talk) 22:41, 14 December 2016 (UTC)