User talk:Ysamuel44/sandbox

I really enjoyed reading your topic. I think you have gotten a decent amount of information given that abscess of the thymus is a rare condition and there is not a lot of research on it, congrats for that. I also think your abstract is very thorough. I think you should add citations to your wiki link. Also, look over the Cause section I think you can place some information you have in that section to your pathology section because it seems more adequate for the pathology section.--ILgdl18 (talk) 05:31, 15 November 2019 --ILgdl18 (talk) 05:31, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

I think you did a great job of describing the abscess of the thymus and how this effects of the human body. My main suggestion would be to add free link (the blue text) to allow readers to easily view certain terms that they may not understand. for example, T-cells, thymus (you do a great job of explaining the thymus but there is a wiki article pertaining to the thymus and this will allow readers to research more about the thymus if needed), and syphilis are just a few examples. You have plenty of other terms in your article to add free links to. "A biopsy can be performed by the collection of the abscess fluid matter in the thymus through centesis. Once collected, the fluid matter collected, will be tested for the presence of organisms that can be detrimental to the health" I would also move this statement into the diagnosis section because it is more relevant there. Overall you did a great job going into detail about the condition. Aherrera09 (talk) 18:55, 15 November 2019 (UTC)aherrera09

Sweiner02 (talk) 15:42, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Remove the topic title from the top
 * Needs to be thoroughly cited throughout.
 * Needs recent research, prognosis, and epidemiology.
 * Lots of good information here! The organization needs some work, but I'm happy to see how this is coming together.