User talk:Ytan11sf/Last Night (1998 film)

Okay. Before we peer review: can you go through and italicize the additions/improvements that you've made? (I can't tell by comparing to the original article.). This will help your peer reviewers to evaluate etc. ProfHanley (talk) 17:43, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

=Peer Review 4/14= I can't really review this page until you bold or italicize what you've written

-HLPickard — Preceding unsigned comment added by HLPickard (talk • contribs) 20:21, 14 April 2021 (UTC)


 * I have bold the part I edited in the Lead and development section. The plot is >90% new/rewritten. More characters and all characters' role and details are added. Let me know if you need more info. Ytan11sf (talk) 22:37, 14 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review 4/17
Hello Yee Jian, sorry I hadn't reviewed your work earlier, I wasn't sure where to find our assigned peer reviewings until you messaged me today. I've gone ahead and completed the review. You can find the comprehensive review here,

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ytan11sf/Last_Night_(1998_film)/WillKBeatty_Peer_Review

I will also be messaging you on your talk page, just to make sure you're aware of my feedback. I hope i've been helpful and feel free to reach out if you need any help.

WillKBeatty (talk) 19:57, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey! You asked if I could look at your article - it looks really good! Good work - I think you significantly improved the plot from the original article, but my suggestion would be to introduce or describe the characters in the first paragraph. You name drop a ton of characters and it's a little hard to keep them straight in my head. You also improved the cast list, that looks good. The two new sources you found are perfect, reliable and relevant sources. I could be wrong, but I think the professor wanted at least five new sources for this assignment. So, I think your next steps are to dig deep for other sources, or you could expand upon sources that are already cited in the article. What you already have looks great though, and I like how you expanded the lead section too. You could also add other sections if you can find the sources for them - you could include more info on the year 2000 problem and how it relates to the film, for example. LofgrenSFSUenglish465 (talk) 05:35, 19 April 2021 (UTC)